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Now, I've decided on a few changes to the story. Instead of a goo friend, there's this hot black slimegirl called Lady Fear. Why? Because I'm a young adult filled with libido and want to have a steamy romance in my screenplay. 

I don't think that's a crime.
It's not a crime.

So alright, what happens is that 
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The Pendulum, fear of everything becomes ruler of the fears. Birthed into this world by the clumsiness of the mortals, they are all. The only one who joins them is Fortuna, lady of luck. The others were devoured. Fortuna becomes 
becomes
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This is way too easy, way too easy. Gong! Gong! Don't just spew info at your audience, that's just force feeding them. Plant a few red herrings and leave clues, that's how you write without talking down to them. Well, the red herring is just for fun. Hey, you. Yes you, the reader! I need you to do me a favor. I know this may seem weird, but you gotta trust me on this one. Go to the comment section of this or in the thread you found it in and tell JoJo how much you love salami! I promise it's gonna make or break this story.

Carry on.

She and Jody start hitting it off, but that's more the subtle subplot. Lady Fear starts talking about how they might get out of here and starts spewing exposition about the Pendulum and perhaps, if I'm feeling up for it, maybe a bit about salami.

Salami? Why? Eh, I meant Fortuna.

Why the fuck?
Salami?

I must be hungry, I'll post more updates later, bye bye!